Wednesday, 13 March 2013

The Storyline

This is the final draft of our story line in which was written by our writer Atta Ahmad...


The story

No one can be perfect, yet no one knows how each person really is; the story follows the bases of having a perfect guy in the relationship, well at first he may be amazing but indecently he is slightly spoiled with being able to do what he wants, the girlfriend realises that, and tries to leave; a fight occurs, he gets serious which results them breaking up and the girlfriend then hanging herself. Subconsciously affected, he starts to see things which lead to him becoming paranoid and anxious. A group friends decide to go out and have fun in the woods, they decide to make a camp for the night, all in pairs except one of them; calling this person A, is sitting on his own, drinking and occasionally making jokes, and having couples I'd drinks. Before the group of friends grouped, person A had an argument with his girlfriend, which ended up quite violently when he beat and beat her. He occasionally day dreams about that very scene and his friends started to get concerned and seem to be becoming distant, after a while when the main character snaps out if his horrors and tries to make it look like nothing had happened; his friends try to accept it and end up becoming very enthusiastic and decide to party out till late.

Walking off with a fag in his right hand he continues to walk and says to the guys behind him. (The surrounding starts to get dark, sunset) so he walks on towards the bushes ahead, suddenly he hears a sound from the other side behind him. He turned around using his flash light which he already had in his hand and looks deeply into the bushes, a figure appears to be a person jumps out and scares person A, the person jumped out was one of the people from group, and person B. relieved he continues and walks on to have a leek. When he gets back to the group he sits down and continues his fun, he walks in while the others were telling some jokes. As time goes by he ends up falling asleep. Teenagers at some circumstances tend to have an occasional hangover, where

The next morning he wakes up with a blanket on top of him, next to his mates who were laying in their sleeping bags, he stands with a hangover headache and says " Ah my head, what happened?" He suddenly feels dizzy but manages to walk on, he walks towards the bushes to take another leek, once he does it he zips up his pants and walks to the others a mysterious figure standing next to the trees appears and person A asks is that you person B? The figure moves closer, person A realises who it is. He panics he moves back suddenly a knife appears. Swish a stab right into the gut his facial expression with his wide open mouth. End of scene. 

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